Open Poetry #31 |
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Headlights Muted |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving ![]() |
That drive inside keeps tearing up the highway. Going so fast forgot to say goodbye. Just thought you'd still be waiting when i got home. But somehow went and lost my way, and with the headlights muted cant see in front of me. Never really had a direction and walking in circles used to suit me just fine, but running felt free. All the guidance i needed was right here on the back of that postcard reading "wish you were here" oh, dreaming is a fine destination for dreamers. Think i may have forgotten how. Cause im blinded by the pain of scenery rushing by and broken love songs on the radio. Must be a weak signal, poor reception, Or maybe Im just lost. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
And this soupy warmth of confusion settled on my roller-coaster as I read this...you've mastered the way to describe the most intangible of feelings, making me realize that they are real to not only just me. I enjoy reading your posts much. McLean |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetessInDawn~ 'walking in circles used to suit me just fine, but running felt free' Oh, Lordy ... I love this thought~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big angel hugs) I think ever too much the tears can cloud up our minds and give us bad frequencies somedays that only make us remember the misfortunes! (sad sigh) Turn the dial and listen to your heart and you will find true joy, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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CP Junior Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 17 |
I liked your poem ~chelsea~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully said. Love, Margherita |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful mix of soft rhythms and depth of feeling...moves beautifully and honestly...much enjoyed.....Paul |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I really enjoyed your poem Dawn, but this really got to me... Never really had a direction and walking in circles used to suit me just fine, but running felt free. All the guidance i needed was right here on the back of that postcard reading "wish you were here" Love it~ I'm so glad you're here!! |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh! I know how you feel...maybe we're all lost... great piece, made me think |
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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Muted isn't the proper pen name for you because you have so much wisdom, talent and write wonderfully. I really enjoy your work!! |
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