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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Passing just beyond the tips of outstretched wander Your music drifts over in a covering of calm Mighty and mystic the giggles of gander Yet light in it settling soft as a psalm When life stabs its teeth on exposed skin of white Jubilation the bandage that soothes Ever simple and stunning in all dreams so bright In the healing of horror now smoothes While the sea becomes quiet and the sunset so still In a melody soft deems content In response dawns a smile that the mind won’t distill So surrounds the escaped sigh you lent Copyright Kkh 1/31/04 |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Wow, TD! This is incredible...amazing imagery! Thank you!  Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
In response dawns a smile that the mind won’t distill So surrounds the escaped sigh you lent It does, doesn't it... Now, what would three dozen steamed and piping hot oysters do? Just ask...I know!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is sooooooo beautifully tranquil, sweet friend, I absolutely love this as the horizon glows with colors of daybreak all around the moment, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, yes I concur: "While the sea becomes quiet and the sunset so still In a melody soft deems content In response dawns a smile that the mind won’t distill So surrounds the escaped sigh you lent" Lovely, SG |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
on the sea of serenity all is calm now a blissful moment you have given us |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Diamond, you are! I loved these lines: "While the sea becomes quiet and the sunset so still In a melody soft deems content In response dawns a smile that the mind won’t distill So surrounds the escaped sigh you lent" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always amaze |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. I was just questioning the existance of serenity and here you are proving it to me beautifully.  I'd hoped I was wrong. Thank you. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
This one makes me sigh contently Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ A *sigh* is just what this is~ Beautiful dear poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Awesome imagery. It's simply amazing how the mind can picture words written in a poem. I loved this one! |
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