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misao
Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 50

0 posted 2004-01-31 01:46 PM

The love that I cry
the tears that I keep
I think of you
as I fall asleep.

The more that I beg
the more that I pled
to get you back I always succeed.

There are dreams that I keep
that have only you inside
dreams of hapiness
where the hatred has died.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-01-31 01:59 PM

misoa,
  nicely articulated thoughts here...

The love that I cry
the tears that I keep
I think of you
as I fall asleep.

I enjoyed your write.  Thank you.
              Sadelite

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-01-31 03:06 PM

(big angel hugs) This is a beautifully bitersweet write, dearest friend, and I wish for these dreams to come part of you in reality and bring joy and happiness to your life forever, God Bless You, let them come true, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Misao, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-01-31 03:36 PM

I really liked this. I liked the
way that it sounded when read out loud.

hugs

Ehtel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-02-01 01:36 AM

Good use of rhythm, Misao.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2004-02-01 06:43 PM

You are without a doubt, my favorite poet here at Passions.

(there, how was that?)

love,

mom

(bragging is a mother's right sweetie)

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-01 06:45 PM

Good work! Grover.

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 2004-02-01 06:52 PM

Beautiful sentiments!! This is really good. I'd like to see you write something with serenity though - there! that's a challenge!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-02-01 07:00 PM

Very very nicely done...an dmuch enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ Is that love I see in your eyes...
or merely a reflection of mine? ~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2004-02-01 07:05 PM

"The love that I cry
the tears that I keep
I think of you
as I fall asleep."

This is wonderful, Misao...

Love the rhythm and rhyme, as well
as the sentiment... very nicely done

Seconding PdV's request... would love
to see you duet with Serenity...smile

Hugs,
~Vicky

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2004-02-01 07:19 PM

I agree with all said above..
nice writing..a duet with mom would be nice.

M

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2004-02-05 10:41 AM

aw, this is fantastic. Enjoyed your words much.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2004-02-05 05:27 PM

Enjoyed...James

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2004-02-05 07:53 PM

misao

I can relate to this feeling...very well done!

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