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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-01-31 08:20 AM

The deer
on the road
side, fresh
kill, eyes
skyward,
left to
wither

the drifts
of snow that
lay a shawl
on him

the leaf
sailing by
enroute at
eternity's
door

a rainbow
drips off
treetops
trapped
between
the sun
and the
storm

the bottle
head blonde
wandering
thru another
season

connected
dots,
forming
constellations

this january
morn

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-31-2004 10:38 AM).]

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

1 posted 2004-01-31 08:26 AM

"A rainbow
drips off
treetops
trapped"

The imagery in this piece is wonderful, your poetry is picturesque, very vivid. I really enjoyed this one. I haven't visited for a while but this was definately a powerful welcome back. Brilliant.

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

2 posted 2004-01-31 08:58 AM

I love your descriptions :-)

"Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~Leonardo da Vinci

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

3 posted 2004-01-31 09:50 AM

As I read I see so many lines that could lead to another beauty of poetry.
Bon-Bon

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-01-31 10:09 AM

bottle head blonde,,,,,,
bah,,,,,,it says right ont he package,,,"all natural",,,so, that makes us natural blondes!
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2004-02-02 08:44 AM

Better to be a bottle head blonde than no blonde at all....interesting read

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-02-02 09:26 AM

Hey, Moonchild, I never would have guessed you weren't a real blonde -- I've been out of pocket for about a week until last night and now I'm trying to catch up a little. This was interesting.

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-02-02 09:49 AM

Keep wandering as seasons come and go, you paint an ethereal landscape and yet bring me right back to the present moment.... ~P

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2004-02-02 04:33 PM

thanks kids
for walking with me on this

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

9 posted 2004-02-02 08:16 PM

interesting. not what i expected. a refreshing change from the typical vacuity associated with those akin to the title.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-02-02 09:02 PM

thanks chris u said a mouthful

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-02-03 04:49 AM

imagery...you got it good with this one

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2004-02-04 08:59 PM

Oh yes and I want winter done with already myself . . .

beautiful as always Michele

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

13 posted 2004-02-04 09:03 PM

Exceptional! Grover.

celestecat
Junior Member

since 2004-02-02

Posts 29

14 posted 2004-02-04 10:17 PM

enjoyed it immensely. well done.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2004-02-04 10:59 PM

(big angel hugs) Oh Michele, this is wonderful, sweet friend, keep connecting the dots and you may come up with so many inscriptions, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

16 posted 2004-02-05 08:09 AM

This is really beautiful writing. I could see every one of those constellations in my own memories. As for being a bottle-head blonde - I've yet to meet a female blonde, natural or otherwise, who wasn't great at being all woman.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2004-02-05 07:57 PM

a rainbow
drips off
treetops
trapped
between
the sun
and the
storm

Michele, I love this part especially.
Very beautiful!!

Hugs

Ethel

(hey, here's my poem about everyday being Valentine's Day. LOL)
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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2004-02-05 08:07 PM

Excellent imagery Michele...are you sure
about the bottlehead part?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

19 posted 2004-02-05 08:34 PM

thanks kids,
and silly me, i really shouldnt have given
myself and roots away i guess

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