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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Peeling By peeling of each layers lie The feelings of forever die. Prodigious and insidious And some would say perfidious It seems illusion brought to bloom Is striped away by changing doom And leaves no error on the board Erosion by the Eros lord I see in waking ever day An add of weigh a hair of gray A mist upon illusions grace The echo of the mirrors face The meaning is a mystery I cannot sort the history I cannot stay the bloom from rot Nor can I seem untie the knot So time will sew me in the end And grime will blow me round the bend |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
By peeling of each layers lie The feelings of forever die. Prodigious and insidious And some would say perfidious It seems illusion brought to bloom Is striped away by changing doom And leaves no error on the board Erosion by the Eros lord =========================== So time will sew me in the end And grime will blow me round the bend ============================= Ahhhh...but your rhymes will leave your mark on time... written in stone..you are too cool down to your bones!!!  By peeling of each layers lie The feelings of forever die. Prodigious and insidious And some would say perfidious See what I mean??!!! Grime-schmime--you rock and it rolls me. *L*  *ww*    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Excellent concept, you have a way with words my dear friend...another valued early morning read...it's always a treat to read you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The meaning is a mystery I cannot sort the history I cannot stay the bloom from rot Nor can I seem untie the knot So time will sew me in the end And grime will blow me round the bend ~*~ Interesting, that only yesterday my research on a new book is echoed in your words of today... which, as you have now given us, will live, forever... [and amen to that!]  |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Not so up on “Erosion by the Eros lord” But know well of ” It seems illusion brought to bloom Is striped away by changing doom” Another excellent write Gloom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read Sy! Ready for a hot cup of blueberry tea? Don't get up...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
your poetry always seems to have perfect meter....never mind the cool way you rhyme...  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I've been seeing some of that gray mist the last few years myself, so I can appreciate you point of view! Keep 'em comin'! Have a great day, Seymour! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, there may be a new silver hair every now and then .... but to compensate there is your golden poetic vein flowing powerfully down the page! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another...yet another |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, As long as I can roll my tinkerbell and hear the sounds and feel the swell. LeeJ, And it's always a treat to see your reply. Sunshine You are a dear. Hugs Professor, Thank you my friend. Nancy, I'd love some tea. SEA So nice to see your comments again. iliana, LOL Thank you dear. Margherita, You are so sweet. passing, You are kind. Hugs |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Take another look in that mirror, T-Man! Your bloom is never going to rot! You will always have a sweet face that makes the ladies Sy, and twinkling eyes that captivate and charm the young and old alike! EA P.S. Be thankful for the weigh of every gray hair! Toupees are such a nuisance to care for! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...You have many days and many more poems ahead my friend. A sad write and tender reveling of your heart. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Never wore a toupee in fact I shaved off what was left and am now in the vogue. LOL Paul Thanks and I hope so my friend. |
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