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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2004-04-13 02:40 PM

contentions kill
what hopes remain
as i exhume
what best lay buried

purpose corroded
by the pine
of self-reflection

no longer pacified
in the hermitage

in an empty
sleepless bed
another piece dies

slight edit, retitle and repost from sanctuary

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-04-13 04:09 PM

this feels so sad....have missed reading you

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2004-04-13 04:12 PM

Photo removed?!!?...yea, they removed mine too....it was a nude....like the write critter...welldone...as always..

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-13 04:43 PM

contentions kill
what hopes remain
as i exhume
what best lay buried

Hey Bello...
This speaks volumes to me.

I'm glad I caught this sad yet wonderful write by you.

keeping it.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-04-13 04:45 PM

Enjoyed this!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-04-13 04:56 PM

Much enjoyed the read Raph.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-04-13 05:09 PM

I wish your photo was up and running again! I pine over the lost reflection!

EA

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-04-13 05:17 PM

You need more sunshine, dear Raffaele.

This is a great write, even so very melancholic.

Abbracci.
Margherita

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2004-04-13 05:47 PM

Look, you know I've already bawled me eyes out today at LOTR, and now this?

Somebody help me.

Those first lines are killers.

Digging up the past can be a bad thing, but this poem, i'm glad you did.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

9 posted 2004-04-13 07:04 PM

akhuna mattata mate...

dig as always

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-04-13 11:36 PM

Thanks to all, gemma i told you to stop looking at my face..it makes me cry too

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-04-14 03:01 AM

I know what you mean Raph

piece by piece

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

12 posted 2004-04-14 08:34 PM

"purpose corroded
by the pine
of self-reflection"

Loved that stanza best..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2004-04-28 11:58 AM

danke guys

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