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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Do I... Somehow not see what I've got? Stab me in my heart I forgot. Do I... Need to be reminded of who I am? Sacrifice me once more not the lamb. Do I... See too much or not enough? Help me to stand my edges are rough. Do I... Still have you...my life? Pain inside sharper than any knife. Do I... Only hurt me alone? A cancer in my mind full blown. Do I... Still have my life...you? No more I can do. Do I... Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kyle...I think you really do know the answer here.. Enjoyed this piece..as I do all that you write. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good read here. I liked the rhythm and repetition. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Enjoyed ! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! I don't think you need any more uncertainty in your life ~ Do you??? Mind you, your angst brought about a pretty neat little poem!  Warm hugs, EA |
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