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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Slow Down Slow down, e-a-s-e your hand along my arm, linger awhile, lips on lips - say the words, the words . . . whispered, so I barely hear you breathe. Feel the heat, cheek to cheek, the pounding of hearts trying to sync . . . e-a-s-y now, we've the night, all night long, to slide our souls . . . as one. Slow down . . . slow . . . down . . . e-a-s-e your hand, and linger . . . yes, linger . . . there. w. james beard, jr. (c) april 2004 [This message has been edited by jwesley (04-13-2004 06:19 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley Great write, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
*sigh* Love this! Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely.. smiling here Maree. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh myyyyyyy...sigh!!!!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a man with a slow hand....ah |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ So very lovely ... just reading the title had me singing 'Feeling Groovy'~ Now maybe just mentioning it will get it stuck in your head too~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief! I like this VERY much! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm slowin'! I'm slowin'! Well at least my hand is! ~ but my heart's another matter! lol  EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-13-2004 06:55 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jimmy The thought of slowing down because you have so much time...is lovely...like beginnings. Enjoyed this romantic poem! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Most sensual and expressive poem here Jimmy. Wonderful write. TD |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
jwesley, This is one of those reads that I'd enjoy hearing the poet recite.....perhaps with a rose between his teeth~ pictureme :-) |
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