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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-04-12 02:08 PM

To disappear...

As if the moment calls for
only this.

And we meet in veiled
agreement.

Eager to be found.

Invisible1
New Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 6
Austin, Texas

1 posted 2004-04-12 02:10 PM

it's a good beginning, but is it finished?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-04-12 02:17 PM

Eric...

You know how I enjoy your poetry...

Thank you.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-12 02:30 PM

as always...great work

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-04-12 02:32 PM

Applause!

Eric...you shine this living moment on a sea of what could be. So good!
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-04-12 04:06 PM

Great work Eric!
Beautiful as usual..much enjoyed as I do all your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-12 04:44 PM

A very good write. Enjoyed, Eric!

Jaime Fradera
Senior Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 843
Where no tyranny is tolerable

7 posted 2004-04-12 08:28 PM

I'm neither here nor there ...
Now!! I am not there ...
I could be anywhere ...
No no!! I am in fact nowhere!!
Write me, if you dare!!
:---)!!
Jaime

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2004-04-12 08:33 PM

WOW !!
Another keeper!
hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-04-13 05:05 PM

Ahh to be invisible and transcend this world, where souls communicate and gather secrets!
You know how to capture my attention!
Beautiful little gem.
I love you. Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-04-13 05:14 PM

Aw, to be lost with one's love in such a veiled moment...

Linda

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

11 posted 2004-04-13 05:51 PM

Eric, great to read you again!

this has such elegance, and meaning to me.

keeping it.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2004-04-14 09:53 AM

so much between the words.....

lovely this

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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