Open Poetry #31 |
Goodbye Duet |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can't let myself focus anymore on what you are doing wrong I'm staying centered on myself because I've felt lost for way to long. It's not that I don't love you It's not that I am right It's because I love you so that I'll no longer fight I'm afraid I'm losing sight of the person inside of me I've been working so very hard maintaining individuality It's not that I don't care for you It's not because I am right It's because I've loved you so and would rather seek the light I would bring you from the darkness if you would accept this love so pure but healing begins from within we find our own internal cure. It's me that's always loved you most I've given all I have to give If you can't see the stars at night It's because you refuse to live I love you even more now than I did back then but I can't forget about the "me" and I can't quit believing again. So take the love I once gave you and walk away, my friend I loved you once, you had the best But it's better that we end. Gentle Spirit and Sunshine Karilea, thank you for the pleasure to write with you again. This was truly a delight for me. HUGS |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea and Donna A beautiful blending of heart's words strong! Hugs to you both. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful you two! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This was a fun and quick write, Donna...I really enjoyed the little lift you gave my day... we'll duet again very soon! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This sounded like a blues song..well done ladies |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks, Toe. I thought it sounded a bit like a song, myself, so perhaps we can get one of our musicians to put it to music, y'think? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful blending of poetic voices! Very much enjoyed! ~Hugs to you both~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone, this was a pleasure to write. Karilea, thank you for making the day a lil bit brighter. Hugs. |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
This sang itself right alone! Enjoyed this and agree it could be a blues song or perhaps a country song! Enjoyed the read, pictureme :-) |
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