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Likenings to the Core
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hardened as shell of egg, he is likened To the crust of earth perhaps fifty miles deep, perhaps Where emotions choose not to seep. Within the inner core, the inner yolk, Burns not golden,hotter red, molten lava While rock returns to burning streams Churning olden dreams, fault line seams. If Earth were an apple, there’d be such a core, With no burning metal or deadly Vesuvius lava, But within nurtures tightly woven clutch, Would rest star of apple seed desired much. [This message has been edited by Sadelite (04-12-2004 01:55 PM).] |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Churning olden dreams, fault-line seams." Im feeling the fault lines today.. this touched me.. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yes, this is him -- written so sweetly and with so much love. Enjoyed! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I really enjoyed this ... As emotions pour from the inner core You have so much to tell , I am glad you came out your shell Hope |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, I hope the faultline feeling diminshes soon, muted. Being on the edge is not a pleasant feeling. iliana, This could describe many. Thanks for your response. Have a good day, Jo. (I've used these hands-on analogies to teach my own children about the composition of the Earth... It seems people, in some way, must be constructed similarly.) Hope, Thank you for reading and responding to this. Yes, I've come out of many of my "shells" but have many more to go... Sadie [This message has been edited by Sadelite (04-13-2004 04:52 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just hugs  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Dixie, Hugs back at you. Sadie |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sadelite There are many things deep within any core......worth the digging, I think. I really liked your poem! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Martie, I agree. The diggings are infinite. And, you must be aware of how I like your poems... Thanks for your response. Sadie |
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