Open Poetry #31 |
I Hear |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I hear The timbre of the timber sings Onto the air on limber strings With dancing leaves in mellow twist That sparkles in the dawn of mist. And awe has settles o’er my mind In ecstasy of beauties find And I am crested in the preen To dash upon its shore of scene I wallow in the loveliness The mornings beauty giving bless Stand before the altars fall And catch the essence of it all I do not search I do not cry I do but hear and watch and sigh And pray that what is left to feel Will stay the time for all to heal Yet some will say and what of pain And I will say it’s but a cane. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, Another powerfully excellent write! " Yet some will say and what of pain And I will say it’s but a cane." Your poem was so upbeat until I came to the splinter (even up-beat then, but I became aware of the thoughts behind the poem more); Stimulating poem, Sy. I hope this finds the sun warmly beginning to shine in the land of Seymour. Sadie |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done Sy. I enjoyed this poem. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Much enjoyed this mornings read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Grab upon this, your walking stick Oh Seer, to see yourself beyond the mist, It shall cut through the fogs so thick And carry you forward to lands so blessed... Where bobbing gems of colored glory Emote their fragrance to fill your nose And fairies cavort by enchange of story Then prepare your bed with petals of rose For they woulds't keep you in this glen Where thunder rolls and lovers dance That you may sift the history of men Knowing each one had but one romance And 'tis like you to see them in glee For such is the magic of woven history... ~*~ Do you smile when you inspire? I would certainly hope so... Good morning, Sy. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I do not search I do not cry I do but hear and watch and sigh And pray that what is left to feel Will stay the time for all to heal ... for all to heal! Thank you Master Seymour! Beautiful message. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Smiles. Juju |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Imagine sun where there is none Exposing hearts in darkest night To capture scenes for dreams undone for lack of conscious guiding light Where souls are free to take thier speed From caution's large restraining ropes And sleepers fill thier greatest needs In fairytales of faithful roles Look you there with keenest eye And find the secret of the scrolls That deal with tides of compromise Allowing them no place to roll And if you look real close you'll see A friend that looks a lot like me.... Yes SY you inspire....Sunshine's right! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite Enjoyed your reply. scorpio Thank you for the well done. Nancy, Thanks for the hugs a back. Sunshine A wonderful reply, enjoyed Love and hugs back sweet Margherita. Juju thank you. ethome That poem should go on the sight. Thank you my friend. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very strong my friend, and well worded...as usual when reading yours, I much ejoyed the read. jwesley |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Top of the Evenin', Sir T! The timbre of your sultry songs Sways my limbs in limber dance Among the leaves of mellow morn I flit about in fairy prance. I catch the essence of Sy's sweet bless For his sonnets spread happiness. Birdie kisses, EA |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"I wallow in the loveliness The mornings beauty giving bless Stand before the altars fall And catch the essence of it all" I have been in this place, Seymour.. Beautiful poem...just right for me to read after battaling the world all day...thank you ________ice ><> btw...I do read all of your poems, this time of the year, I am always rushed, so do not always have the time to reply....but I do read and enjoy them....ford |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley Thank you for this good reply Earth Angel ice Then read this, your answer pleasures me no end. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
every day, without fail love it |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, everyday without fail. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I do not search I do not cry I do but hear and watch and sigh And pray that what is left to feel Will stay the time for all to heal" Seymour, always, it's great to read you.... this is lovely |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And I will agree! ......jo Great poem, Seymour! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA Thank you sea it's nice to hear from thee. iliana Thank you sweet. |
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