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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Here you are again, my friend-- a constancy of strange. cold-clutch grip of fingertip the servant of a masochist clawing at the cage of rib inside out and outside in Chisel-freedom from these walls hammer-chip the sweet downfall of this-- the very least of which is grace that it just stays the same... Why this courtship of the light? Every sundown dance the fight battling the concrete me knowing no one lives, who kills... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I've always loved your musings.. this is really awesome. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm so very happy to see you again meg...  Thank you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
cold-clutch grip of fingertip the servant of a masochist clawing at the cage of rib inside out and outside in You sure know how to make the reader feel.. Wondermous m'dear.  Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
haunting, kinda chilling |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You strike the mind with pure clear images, and I am always inspired by the strength and the will of your craft. TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
"Why this courtship of the light?" There are so many facets to be seen in the light...yours are beautiful and real and complicated.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yet another thought provoking write Ser. Well done and much enjoyed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So, when you leave me without words? All I have is a  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
goosebumps again! hugs, Chrislane Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Awesome K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely flow...James |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
agree with all the above....stunning work Karen~ ~~**~~ |
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