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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-04-11 11:34 PM


In dreams she sees her death
The end of all the world

Mistakes reality
Fears for humanity

Lost imagination
hoping for redemption

She lost her voice screaming
No one listens to her

No one believes in her
After all she’s crazy

A lost, lonely child
With a mind gone wild

Though she is so alone
She carries on the task

She will find and unmask
The truth in her dream world

Before it all will ends
Sanity’s sake depends

So is the world crazy?
Maybe we’re all crazy.


-Juju
just a thought...

© Copyright 2004 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Penomous Verson
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since 2004-04-09
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1 posted 2004-04-12 12:40 PM


felt.

but..

i dont see how it could be "just a thought"

you speak the truth, have faith in it

PenVerse

Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-04-12 12:51 PM


Interesting write.  I read it about four times, each relating a little more to someone who was once very close to me.  Crazy?  Who knows what crazy is?
Grover
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3 posted 2004-04-12 11:29 AM


Good write, Juju!
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-04-12 11:39 AM


Juju
I never thought man was sane to begin with,
enjoyed the write.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-04-12 12:01 PM


maybe you're right
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just out of reach
6 posted 2004-04-12 12:26 PM


Could be. Ya, just never know.
Enjoyed the write. Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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7 posted 2004-04-12 01:24 PM


"So is the world crazy?
Maybe we’re all crazy."

I think you are on to something here.  And I do agree.  Wonderful write, perceptive, and very interesting.
JL


Juju
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In your dreams
8 posted 2004-04-12 04:20 PM


Penomous verson
Will actually it was. one of my dear friends was writing / making a Some cd called mental illness. I was thinking about paranoa.

Sadilite
Exactly.

Grover
Thank you

Seymore,
psychology is blurry.
Thank you for the reply my friend

PS
(smiles)

Nightshade
Smiles.... thank you for the reply

JL
Heheh. Thanks for the replys.

-Juju

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