Open Poetry #31 |
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Crazy is relative |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams ![]() |
In dreams she sees her death The end of all the world Mistakes reality Fears for humanity Lost imagination hoping for redemption She lost her voice screaming No one listens to her No one believes in her After all she’s crazy A lost, lonely child With a mind gone wild Though she is so alone She carries on the task She will find and unmask The truth in her dream world Before it all will ends Sanity’s sake depends So is the world crazy? Maybe we’re all crazy. -Juju just a thought... |
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Penomous Verson Junior Member
since 2004-04-09
Posts 20NY |
felt. but.. i dont see how it could be "just a thought" you speak the truth, have faith in it ![]() PenVerse |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Interesting write. I read it about four times, each relating a little more to someone who was once very close to me. Crazy? Who knows what crazy is? |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good write, Juju! ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju I never thought man was sane to begin with, enjoyed the write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe you're right |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Could be. Ya, just never know. Enjoyed the write. Chris ![]() Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"So is the world crazy? Maybe we’re all crazy." I think you are on to something here. And I do agree. Wonderful write, perceptive, and very interesting. JL ![]() |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Penomous verson Will actually it was. one of my dear friends was writing / making a Some cd called mental illness. I was thinking about paranoa. Sadilite Exactly. Grover Thank you Seymore, psychology is blurry. Thank you for the reply my friend PS (smiles) Nightshade Smiles.... thank you for the reply JL Heheh. Thanks for the replys. -Juju |
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