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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-11 09:01 PM



Let It Rain


tonight the clouds
call from the sky
screaming a name
that wets my lips
lightening freckles
skin in rain
and suddenly I am
taken by storm


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Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2004-04-11 09:04 PM


With moist lips
To be taken by storm
Doesn’t seem to such a bad thing,
As always your words spur thoughts

Gloom

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2 posted 2004-04-11 09:31 PM


sweet! awesome!
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-04-11 09:40 PM


love to get stormswept........from a distance tho...lol
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-04-11 11:00 PM


I imagine it's getting there about now.

It was a lovely riot here, just about dawn.


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5 posted 2004-04-11 11:46 PM


H... I love this...
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6 posted 2004-04-12 10:34 PM



bernie

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Bernie Slicker

pictureme
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7 posted 2004-04-12 11:33 PM


I've always enjoyed storms and rain! :-)
I like thunder cause of the lightning :-)
liked this read!
pictureme :-)

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