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Lullaby On The Wind
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Lullaby On The Wind |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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There's a lullaby on the wind Blowing warm and free Tossing the leaves At the top of the mighty oak As she blocks the sun I stand alone in the darkness Praying for the light Wishing to climb to the melody There is a lullaby Flying among the birds Being tossed around the clouds I have seen the happiness And joy it brings Yet still, here on the ground They are just notes I have yet to hear *Thank you to Wendy for the inspiration* Some people are like Slinkies . . . not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you see one tumble down the stairs... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Ringo, this was a lovely lullaby, and I believe you do hear it!  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this was a gentle read, very relaxing and uplifting  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I'm speechless....this struck a personal nerve in me, as it fits very well into what I'm going through right now I can relate to these feelings, absolutly beautiful... ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible ending |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I agree with shadows (: Juju |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very, very nice Ringo. Enjoyed. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Ringo, A soothing lullaby I could relate to. keep playing the music! pictureme |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
hi, your poem was well worth taking the time to read. i liked the tone and vibe it sent. very good choice of words and excellent way of communicating your emotions. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Ringo dear,,,,sometimes,,the delicate touch of your words reach places i forgot exsisted,,,,,very lovely,,thank you for such warm feelings Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
iliana- Thank you for the kind words. may you always hear the melody in the trees. muted- Thanks for reading my little scribble. It means mucho to me coming from someone of your talent. Bella- I'm so glad it touched you. Thank you. PS- Thank you. You are always so kind. Juju- Since you agree with shadows, then I offer you the thanks of a greatful scribe. pictureme- I will continue to play, if you will continue to add your verses for all to red. Rosalind- Thank you. Michelle- you never forgot... not while you have Mikey... kisses. Some people are like Slinkies . . . not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you see one tumble down the stairs... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very pretty Ringo...much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
beautifully worded; I could visualize the gentle breeze floating a lullaby slightly above our giant oak, a monster to climb if in pursuit of the lullaby. I enjoyed this very much. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
lovely...h |
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