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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I am the stars, abandonned, mourning the moon the sky , its refuge that seals safe her fate tears of rain that rip apart the cold eyes of night love unrequited and unclaimed, discarded, the unmet desires of the light longing to crown the luna this godless night i am the moon that turns her face and strays in darkness seeking solitude, seeking respite in a swallowed sky, from all that drains the light, the ones that fall seeking shelter in her signature smile that erases their starcrossed plight i am the sea that resonates the sorcery of the onxy sky the requiem march of love lunged deep, the maker of waves that gallop in flight, the echo of miles of sea,the birthing of perpetual dreams that sugarcoat the night to the deep abyss of lonliness, i come in love, only to be stabbed by the needle of deception seeking sanctuary in this well of plentitude i cry to birth the dawn as love goes sour, love goes astray i will come again as i unravel then mend i will ascend as the foliage of forestial rain at the threshold of doom ,i am the fallout foam in an overflowing ocean that came her kissing sands begging beneath drinking the passions of the storms she brings i am my own antedote, time and again, absorbed in the mystical haze as i transcend on whims, in detachment from the truth of pain, i am the cleansing rain the creator of my self, i remain [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (04-11-2004 09:35 AM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is one amazing write, and I am surprised that it has sort of drifted down the page of poetry. Enjoyed the sad beauty of this. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. Hans Christian Anderson |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You paint the sorrow with a far seeing, self fulfilling dream...and that is the truth of how it is to transcend. Hugs, TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Pure poetry of nature -- Inked, this is an amazing piece. I've never read a poem quite like it, the play of life in nature, beautifully penned!  |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..indeed--very songlike, too--much enjoyed-- spiros -------- |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
"to the deep abyss of lonliness, i come in love, only to be stabbed by the needle of deception" I can relate. So beautiful and so vivid your images. I had to read it twice just because I liked it so much. and the ending, just a wonderful close. As always I enjoyed reading your thoughts. ~Live and Laugh~ The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, you are all that and 32 flavors  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading, thanks for sharing |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow this is the longest thing you have done....i have to read it a few more times to comprehend it. Stay tuned! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is amazing! This is beautiful!! This is pure poetry at it's finest!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Wow, this is such a powerful piece. There is such strength in your words. quote: I love these lines... always it comes back to us, to the power we have within to overcome whatever life sends our way... Awesome write.  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
dixie says you're 32 flavors....can I taste a few? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Quite a powerful write... and this... i am the fallout foam in an overflowing ocean that came her kissing sands begging beneath drinking the passions of the storms she brings my favourite. Enjoyed muchly. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Besides being a goddess, did anyone tell you that you are one heck of a fine poetess? Well, I'm adding my voice to the multitude! lol  "i am the cleansing rain the creator of my self, i remain" ~ Indeed you are! ~ and do! EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading and replying as always, it is much appreciated |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
An enjoyable read. I especially liked the last stanza and the ending line. nice job, pictureme :-) |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
YOur mix of fantastic imagery and emotions here is amazing....throughout....I really appreciate the wisdom of the following lines: i am my own antedote, time and again, ~P |
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