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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-04-10 07:25 AM


Dig not my Bones

Dig not the stones in days rerun
The best is gone this drums undone
It filtered to the wind and sea
And that is all that’s left of me

Perhaps an echo here or there
That rides a memory’s cast of flair
That passes in a night of wile
A dream upon phantoms Isle

I would you set your sail anew
Catch the breeze and view the view
See the rainbows of your road
A princess kiss if you’re a toad.

I wish you found your love of need
And grace has blessed you with new seed
That chance has offered you the best
And if you have you’ve past the test

So do not dig archaic bone
Just read the writing on the stone


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-04-10 07:38 AM




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2 posted 2004-04-10 08:32 AM


I would you set your sail anew
Catch the breeze and view the view
See the rainbows of your road
A princess kiss if you’re a toad.

How you do this each and every morning amazes me! Thankyou for this sunny Saturday jewel.   hugs, Chris

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3 posted 2004-04-10 08:42 AM


Wonderful Saturday morning read Sy!
Very much enjoyed indeed.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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4 posted 2004-04-10 08:51 AM


I'd rather read your words here, Sy.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2004-04-10 09:19 AM


"Perhaps an echo here or there
That rides a memory’s cast of flair"

The flow in this was musical, rythmic and enchanting ... very much enjoyed your thoughts and pondering within this piece, Sy.  

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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6 posted 2004-04-10 10:39 AM


Dig not the stones in days rerun
The best is gone this drums undone
It filtered to the wind and sea
And that is all that’s left of me

Perhaps an echo here or there
That rides a memory’s cast of flair
---------------
I wish you found your love of need
And grace has blessed you with new seed
That chance has offered you the best
And if you have you’ve past the test

So do not dig archaic bone
Just read the writing on the stone
==================================


I DIG YOUR RHYMES!!!

could one poem be any cooler??
Sy-babers you are the grooviest of the groovy...the Zen Master of the metaphor...the Sultan of the stanza..the Commander of the way cool couplet.

And...the wizard of me winkies. *L*  



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7 posted 2004-04-10 10:45 AM


Seymour~
To pick a part that I love best
Would be very hard to do
Sooooo, I read the all of it
And send dear *hugs* to you~

You're still the greatest 'read-aloud' poet of my day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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HopeS
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8 posted 2004-04-10 01:01 PM


Seymour
Excellent writing indeed , truly enjoyed
Hope

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9 posted 2004-04-10 02:22 PM


always love those last lines
iliana
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10 posted 2004-04-10 02:48 PM


Sey, this was a generous message.  What a wonderful way of thinking of things -- almost zen.  
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2004-04-10 04:06 PM


Sunshine
Hugs love you too.

Chris,
You are a sweetheart.

Nancy,
It's all the tea you brew for me.

scorpio,
A kind thought my friend.

Kit,
So nice to see you here,

JM,
And I dig your answers.


Marge,
You are a sweetheart. Hugs back

HopeS
Thank you dear.

passing,
And I love your replies.

iliana,
A beautiful reply, thank you.


hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 2004-04-14 09:36 PM


Sy...you've woven quite a tapestry of words here...liking it too
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2004-04-14 10:04 PM


hoot,
Thank you so much for the read and the reply

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