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Dig not my Bones
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Dig not my Bones |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dig not my Bones Dig not the stones in days rerun The best is gone this drums undone It filtered to the wind and sea And that is all that’s left of me Perhaps an echo here or there That rides a memory’s cast of flair That passes in a night of wile A dream upon phantoms Isle I would you set your sail anew Catch the breeze and view the view See the rainbows of your road A princess kiss if you’re a toad. I wish you found your love of need And grace has blessed you with new seed That chance has offered you the best And if you have you’ve past the test So do not dig archaic bone Just read the writing on the stone |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I would you set your sail anew Catch the breeze and view the view See the rainbows of your road A princess kiss if you’re a toad. How you do this each and every morning amazes me! Thankyou for this sunny Saturday jewel. hugs, Chris  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Saturday morning read Sy! Very much enjoyed indeed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I'd rather read your words here, Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Perhaps an echo here or there That rides a memory’s cast of flair" The flow in this was musical, rythmic and enchanting ... very much enjoyed your thoughts and pondering within this piece, Sy. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Dig not the stones in days rerun The best is gone this drums undone It filtered to the wind and sea And that is all that’s left of me Perhaps an echo here or there That rides a memory’s cast of flair --------------- I wish you found your love of need And grace has blessed you with new seed That chance has offered you the best And if you have you’ve past the test So do not dig archaic bone Just read the writing on the stone ================================== I DIG YOUR RHYMES!!! could one poem be any cooler?? Sy-babers you are the grooviest of the groovy...the Zen Master of the metaphor...the Sultan of the stanza..the Commander of the way cool couplet. And...the wizard of me winkies. *L*    |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ To pick a part that I love best Would be very hard to do Sooooo, I read the all of it And send dear *hugs* to you~ You're still the greatest 'read-aloud' poet of my day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Seymour Excellent writing indeed , truly enjoyed Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love those last lines |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey, this was a generous message. What a wonderful way of thinking of things -- almost zen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Hugs love you too. Chris, You are a sweetheart. Nancy, It's all the tea you brew for me. scorpio, A kind thought my friend. Kit, So nice to see you here, JM, And I dig your answers. Marge, You are a sweetheart. Hugs back HopeS Thank you dear. passing, And I love your replies. iliana, A beautiful reply, thank you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sy...you've woven quite a tapestry of words here...liking it too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
hoot, Thank you so much for the read and the reply |
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