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Open Poetry #31

A Morning's First Glance

Dr Gonzo
Junior Member

since 2002-11-21

Posts 26

0 posted 2004-01-30 09:19 PM

I see the love
I see your eyes
Emerald-green sunrise
Fills my sight
I greet the day after night
Night before the day
Comforted where I lay
Interested in what you say
I embrace the tranquility
Bask in the serenity
Soft music serande
Love songs cliched
An attempt to be original
An attempt to be avant-garde
But love itself is trite
And I hope this will give sight
To the ardor at which I am imbued
When you kiss me good night

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-31 05:25 PM

Very sweet, and gently delivered.
TD

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-01-31 06:03 PM

(smiles) I believe love is the one and only cliche that is always acceptable, sweet friend, no need for avant-garde in something so softly en garde, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dr. Gonzo, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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