Open Poetry #31 |
For Brunettes Only |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For Brunettes Only I press those thoughts again trying to squeeze them into alloted time, knowing there is only so much of it to go around. Awakened early, trying to mend my ways, knowing the look forward, at least on this day is one of sunshine and possibilities. Who am I to distance myself from whispered words that burn into my night mind preying on the not forgotten against the softness within me? What is this, that keeps me awake, tensing my body though trying to dream those dreams that should be within my dark hold? I could drink myself into oblivion, for I have the means but lack the willpower. I need to remember all that passes through me, live it, learn from it and let temptation fall where it may. I could never be blonde, though it is enticing to become someone I am not. I could wish for a young soul, but then I would have missed some of the best times of my life. I could walk out on it all, sometimes wanting the easiness of it. With each moment, I am thinking ahead while living the present, knowing life continues and somehow... I will endure. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, You will endure, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A beautiful write. Enjoyed this very much! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A very beautiful write. Toast to my fellow sparkling brunettes! Happy Easter Maureen. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Maureen and you will indeed endure. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I could never be blonde, though it is enticing to become someone I am not. please just try it; it is so much fun this way, ask blondie, you will carry the sun on your shoulders in the dead of winter, i promise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I believe you my friend...hard as it may be, we MUST endure...otherwise we never taste of the honey to come...besides, our nature is to endure. jwesley |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I can certainly relate to this one, Maureen. Yes, we do survive in spite of ourselves - I often wonder why though. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
With each moment, I am thinking ahead while living the present, knowing life continues and somehow... I will endure Yes, Maureen, you will endure. It seems hard sometimes, but you will. My thoughts are with you. Hugs to you Ethel |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
Great write, a trully introspective look at yourself, keep it around, u may need it for strength and reminder of identity. thanks 4 sharing. p.s.fyi brunettes drive me NUTS :P |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
no matter what colour... no matter what obstacle.. no matter what, you are strong...and you are in touch with what matters... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, everyone. Yes, I will endure...despite the obstacles. Inked one I don't really need to try being a blonde. My greys beneath are turning me light enough. Besides, I y'am what I y'am. Brad, thank you for the brunette confidence... Although I am much lighter than I use to be, I could never really be blonde...I would clash with my olive skin color. M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
So much past applied to the present so well making for the brightest future. Always you endure with class! P.S. Good choice on the blonde thing. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm nto a brunette, blonde, or redhead -- I'm a sort of thousand color shade of dishwater -- ! ! I loooovvvved this poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I'm both of the other colors...strawberry blonde but a great write! |
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