Open Poetry #31 |
Of Symbols |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of symbols Symbols rub ignitions bite Shadows dub the start of light Horizons inkwell filled with dew Writes the mornings awe with hew Creeping on the beach of morn Washing in the breach of dawn Flooding hearts with sheer delight Fills the poets mind with write He thinks himself a phrase or two But cannot justice mornings view But from his heart he makes a brush And paints his feelings in a gush It’s nowhere near the things he sees Aladdin’s lamp could not appease A tear fills up his lower lid There are no words to do his bid From his hand a clone is born for Only God can hone a morn |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"It’s nowhere near the things he sees Aladdin’s lamp could not appease A tear fills up his lower lid There are no words to do his bid From his hand a clone is born for Only God can hone a morn" What a wonderful piece to read at the break of day Sy! So good to read you early in the morn with a cup of tea. ~Morning hugs and tea, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I agree with my sister Enchantress....wonderful piece Seymour! Thankyou for this read. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. Hans Christian Anderson |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
He thinks himself a phrase or two But cannot justice mornings view But from his heart he makes a brush And paints his feelings in a gush ~*~ She believes in phrasing set by dew And justice? Hardly, this morning's hue But from her heart she writes in tones Mixing flesh and muscle, blood, and bone... I have to bless the man that inspires my muse... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a fine painter of words... M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Nobody ... but nobody says it better~ 'He thinks himself a phrase or two But cannot justice mornings view But from his heart he makes a brush And paints his feelings in a gush' *sigh* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Good morning Sy This is so true as you have so adequately expressed and in a very enjoyable and creative read as usual sir. "Creeping on the beach of morn Washing in the breach of dawn Flooding hearts with sheer delight Fills the poets mind with write" Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i raise my coffee mug to you brave seymour a nimble penning ....... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So true...how lucky we are to feast on this beauty. Enjoyed TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Hard to pick a favorite from your wealth of words, but this is high on the list. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Your replies are always a delight. Chris, And a for you too. Sunshine, What a delightful response. Maureen, Thank you dear. Marge, You make me blush. ethome, Thank you my friend. aujussy wolf, And I raise my cup in thanks. ThisDiamond, Thank you for the like. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie High on the list, who could ask more. |
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