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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-04-08 01:14 PM



What will you have left on your plate,
when your good intentions come too late,
when tomorrow never arrives at your door
and all your dreams are on the floor?

Will you remember that endless list of
somedays...
the ones you never saved time for
because you were too busy casting stones,
complaining...
about what others do (or don’t do)
(BTW, it’s not my job to clean up after you)
and when the calendar flips over to another year,

will you finally decide to get off your rear,
put it in gear and move forward from here?

© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-04-08 01:20 PM


No hidden message here!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-04-08 01:23 PM


Excellent Kacy...
I love the way you tell it like it is.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2004-04-08 01:24 PM


LOL, Grover, you are too funny!
No, this one is "on the table" or maybe an "in your face" write.

LOL, Nancy, thanks for the gentle reply.   

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4 posted 2004-04-08 02:00 PM


"will you finally decide to get off your rear,
put it in gear and move forward from here?"

~ I'm tryin'! I'm tryin'! LOL


EA

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-04-08 07:54 PM


tell it straight out, yes good words that pack a punch
Susan
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6 posted 2004-04-08 08:23 PM


Made me smile   Fun read.

Susan

Larry C
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7 posted 2004-04-08 08:25 PM


Still holding back I see!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

vandana
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8 posted 2004-04-08 08:47 PM


enjoyed
Midnitesun
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9 posted 2004-04-08 09:00 PM


LOL, guess there are lots of procrastinators out there.
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10 posted 2004-04-09 01:42 AM


...but I was saving the best for last!!!!
alright, alright....
~K~

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11 posted 2004-04-09 04:47 AM


cool!
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