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Architectural Genius of an Egg (senryu written in thoughts of one of our own) |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
She stands in balance upon her fragile shadow posed to walk on eggs. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like *s M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Eggscellent...  Whomever your wrote for... should be smiling. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Calcium carbonate A fortress to hold the weight, While the hens just wait. Gloom |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What can I say? -- Sounds like a place we've all been to at least one time in our life. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very very nice  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'd like to echo Sunshine's clever response, "Eggcellent"!  EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An oval dome... Smiling at Sadie! TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect! Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I've been there a few times...a perfect description! Enjoyed. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
nakdthoughts, I'm glad you "likes." I went to be thinking about this person and woke up with these words on my tongue. Then, it was a mad rush to the computer before I forgot them. Sadie Sunshine, Thank you for your kindness. I just hope she realizes this one is for her. She has hidden strength, much like the egg. Sadie Professor, Thanks for dropping in with your poetic science lesson. You know how much I enjoy. Sadie iliana, At least once! Take care. I'm glad to hear from you again. We miss your writing. When things slow down, perhaps? Sadie muted, I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm forward to your next post. Sadie earth angel, I appreciate your sweet comment. I hope this beautiful Spring day finds you recouperating well. Take care. Sadie This Diamond, Yes, a very strong oval dome! Sadie Nightshade, You may have exaggerated a bit, but I'll enjoy the flattery! Thank you. Sadie Martie, I suppose we all feel that way at times. Luckily those times go more frequently than they come. Thank you for your sweet response. Sadie |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
hmmm...even when that which is her substance becomes her support...hmmm...what care we must take in relationships, no matter our inner strength...just musing...just reflecting...very good write...there is so much here to enjoy...it leaves one pondering.... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"hmmm...even when that which is her substance becomes her support...hmmm...what care we must take in relationships, no matter our inner strength...just musing...just reflecting" Thank you. Steavenr. You have returned a nice gift for me to ponder. YOur response is very much appreciated. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Being Easter, dear Sadie, I can't help thinking that she might not know that if the eggs break, she might just be walking on sweet chocolate splitters ... and have a brand new vision of sweetness. A very sharp vision of yours. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Margherita, True. I think the structure of eggs (many of them stood erect, just so, would support her. I've read about the strength, but don't remember how much weight they can actually support. It is astounding. Now, just to walk forward with that advancing shadow...Thank you for your continued kindness. Sadie |
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