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Winter Misreading the Sky
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Winter Misreading the Sky |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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From my Journals of Endless Winter ~~~~ {I wish you could see these again} ~ Maybe he is lonely tonight his images speak of ordinary things captured in fields of light I might, for a moment, hear the tapping of his finger upon my soul its a delicate task remembering -- maybe in something I read or touch or how the moon sleeps with rain I am interested in the space between - how different blue looks falling from your eyes – that one night winter will misread the sky you know too the gray running along the scatter It's true this is about love the one thing you keep – yet, turn the key once & you cant keep any of it I try, but do not seem to find a place among this language I will leave all doors open to recall the simple equations of my memory wondering what sphere held us ~ it begins to rain I should have started with that ~~**~~ The sound of silence calls, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream The echo of our souls meet ~~**~~ |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Sigh. why does every poem remind me of him. love. JUju |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I am interested in the space between - how different blue looks falling from your eyes – tender one greeny , i realllllly liked this one , it reached way into my world lol cool one babe  -wolfy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a heartbeat heard within each sigh, each line that fell, in echo |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"I might, for a moment, hear the tapping of his finger upon my soul its a delicate task remembering -- maybe in something I read or touch or how the moon sleeps with rain I am interested in the space between - how different blue looks falling from your eyes – that one night winter will misread the sky" That's beautiful poetry from the soul. Nicely crafted. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know how you do it, but I am always amazed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo dear lady.. again you capture in words what even hearts have a hard time explaining at times.. always in awe of your ability to do so.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am interested in the space between - how different blue looks falling from your eyes – that one night winter will misread the sky you know too the gray running along the scatter ~~~~ I try, but do not seem to find a place among this language I will leave all doors open to recall the simple equations of my memory wondering what sphere held us ~ it begins to rain I should have started with that ================================= OH girlie...ya got me with this one.. but then you always do  you know too the gray running along the scatter yesssssss... I know..... I try, but do not seem to find a place among this language oh darlin...I disagree...   Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I sit here in silence after reading your words.. just staring ar the monitor.. shaking my head..and wanting more of your words to sweep me up, once more. Please let me know when there is a book. There should be you know? You have amazing talent Lauren. Excellent write pretty lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Lauren,  Another beauty you have gifted us with. I love it all, and this ending sums it up perfectly....... I will leave all doors open to recall the simple equations of my memory wondering what sphere held us ~ it begins to rain I should have started with that Hugs, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the gray running along the scatter There is always something in your words that touches, Lauren. I hope you and yours have a wonderful Easter Holiday. M |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
We're free to pursue happiness but sorrow chases us. -- moi great ink here Greeneyes |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow...every line is quoteable...the poem is powerful......it has been forever since I had thoughts as this...wish I had left the doors open as you did...your words are touching... excellent penning |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow awesomeeeeeeeee....i actually fell inlove with this poem keep it upp....love and hugzzzzzzzzzz |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Now, I understand the why and reason. Melancholy from and with much heart. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
thank you all.....luv to all warm hugsss ~~**~~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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