Open Poetry #31 |
False Promise |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spring trembled but once Yesterday’s white warmth, so false Layered skies, swelling Rains could come to bloat yon creek Better snow, tracks to follow |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Don't feel bad KJ, we only get rain, never snow.... Very nicely said, title fits well. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
awww but Lady Spring is in the wind....floating softly behind all the snow hugssss I lie awake at night |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) We've seldom got snow here so far this winter, we got some late last week and are expecting a new winter system for Monday, but otherwise it has been dry and arid out here! (smiles) here's hoping this new storm brings some fluuries your way, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Winters can be warm, snow can be warming...You dear lady, are sunshine. TD |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I love this little winterpoem... |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
I hate Kansas. That might be harsh. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - bring on spring, I'm freezing here... BC |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
You got snow? We got ice. Wanna swap? Nah...just get me out of here, get those lavender teacups from the cupboard, I am on my way. We shall poem the day together with verses of spring. Hugs to you! Patricia |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sunshine, I love this perspective! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea You always see behind the clouds...that is how you got your name, after all. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soon now Karilea.....soon. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just doesn't seem fair...like the season is teasing us |
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