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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-04-07 12:05 PM


An easy goodbye

not of the difficult kind

that I remember so well....


Leaving with the departure of night

into morning

without

a breakfast of hunger



An easy waver upon the frame

for one last kiss

that I know so well....


Upon stairwell I smile

a gentle curve to lips

for a genuine man

that sings with me.



And they stwist

those steps

with my bare feet

a naked symphony

of an easy goodbye.

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Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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1 posted 2004-04-07 12:11 PM


"for a genuine man

that sings with me."

Ohhh..that is a good thing.



And you know it's good when you can stand in barefeet...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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just out of reach
2 posted 2004-04-07 12:12 PM


Oh, so lovely. *sigh*   hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-07 12:19 PM


is there such a thing?
gemjop
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4 posted 2004-04-07 12:34 PM


Thanks ladies!

Dix, i suppose not if its really goodbye forever. But this is more of a 'see you soon'.

xx

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-04-07 01:44 PM


"a naked symphony

of an easy goodbye."


Wow,....just WOW!!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
6 posted 2004-04-07 04:19 PM


Enjoyed much!
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