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Anguish will suffice
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Anguish will suffice |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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She lives in me much more than what can die in fleeting dreams. Her memory long past long term pruned by never. Still always my love. Then we burned in bright crimson contrast. What was it she wore? I need not recall specifically. Perhaps in creation even, her descent was holy. The wall of wailing held no more admiration. And when she approached all sensation left save that which would surrender to her near and drowning eyes. And although now bereft I would not change one thing on this great sphere. To have this vision far outweighs the price. In place of her this anguish will suffice. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Perhaps in creation even, her descent was holy'''' ~ such a powerful sense of longing....this stirred me, and the poem in whole moved me... ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love it when you write about her |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You braved that dark sacred to write this. Thankyou for sharing her. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
What the hell is this?...Where is Nighthawk and what have you done with him?....You wrote Romeo and Juliet too didn't ya....I think you're mixing far too much soda in your scotch these days reb.....I know, you just got out of rehab didn't ya?....I'm considering entering re-tox myself....fine write you old prick..hope you're doing well..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
....when she approached all sensation left save that which would surrender to her near and drowning eyes... ~*~ ok.... I've tried to come up with the appropriate response. All that will suffice, is a thank you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"To have this vision far outweighs the price. In place of her this anguish will suffice." Oh good lord...  Reb~ This is masterful. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Not only do I really dig your poetry, but did I ever tell you how much I dig your pic?!?   EA |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* You pulled from a deep well when you let this flow of love surface. To be remembered like this...*sigh* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful write! JL  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this...is my favorite of all your writes....this is the real 'you' as I know you.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Definitely one of your best... and that's saying a lot, my friend. Excellent work!! Hugs, Auntie *S* |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
nothing i could say would do this justice, so i'll just be..speachless. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I have nothing to say, but it was beautiful. Your poems always touch me. Juju |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Rebel,  I love this poem of romance.  Aren't you surprised? LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Well, thanks all... I'm glad you liked it.. but, it's not my favorite.... Blazey -- um... I don't think anything can come from that far down... things are pretty silent there. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
enjoyed this... though I can see why it might not be a favorite to you, it does speak well to the heart and the idea that it is better to have loved and lost than not loved at all.. nicely done sir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
In fleeting dreams, there is much that lives...some memories good, some sad but all making us who we are. Enjoyed your words, LR M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LR Very much enjoyed this capture of feeling...so well done! |
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