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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-04-06 04:15 PM


Opaque your dreams of something considering an image

Washed in sweet scant secretions
and
the world for you trembles
of rain washing a window

on a night

no-one

remembers

dave

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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
1 posted 2004-04-06 04:32 PM


cant stay away can you?
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-04-06 04:40 PM


and
the world for you trembles
of rain


Especially love these lines Dave

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-04-06 06:06 PM


For how much longer Ink

Dark Angle thank you

But

************************
and
the world for you trembles
of rain washing a window

on a night

no-one

remembers
***************
how many times do we face a wet window

that never delivered

Thanks for your words, they are remembered

Dave

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