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Snow

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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-04-06 09:42 AM

Image_Alexandria Georgiades

burn of want

like milk_toast words
i crave your tongue
my poetry, you are
unwritten, unspoken
    untangled
slipping your ink
through my lips
moving line
by line
each letter
leading us from
me to we
  where hands, lightly
press the burn of want
between
concave thrusts and
        confessional hips

©snow'04

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

© Copyright 2004 Snow - All Rights Reserved

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

1 posted 2004-04-06 09:47 AM

Your talent never ceases to amaze me.

Sensual.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Snow

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desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-04-06 12:14 PM

susan,
that was such a very nice thing to say, thank you very much!!
snow

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

DavePage
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Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-04-06 06:15 PM

Snow

If there is any snow around your home, it must be hardy.

Essence

Dave

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4 posted 2004-04-06 10:19 PM

Luscious.

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In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2004-04-06 10:20 PM

sensual want of desire....amazing

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

IndigoEve
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since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

6 posted 2004-04-07 12:03 PM

mmmmmm
how i do remember. so delicately sumptuous

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

7 posted 2004-04-07 02:35 AM

another beauty

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2004-04-07 06:31 AM

truly beautiful Snow...

Thank you.....

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2004-04-07 12:31 PM

Jesus that made me tingle...I think you're a new favourite of mine.

sensuous and then some.

keeping this.

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