Open Poetry #31 |
Undying Love |
inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
I wrote this for somone specail in my life whom I'm still in love with but,things havn't been going to well between us....enjoy!!!! 4/5/2004 11:37PM You showed me what love was like, Gave me your hand to hold at night, Each and everyday you gave me light, Whispered things that brought a smile, We hugged close to stay strong, We even have our own favorite song, You've giving me faith when I've been weak, Seen me when I've been a mess, Protected me from the uglyness. Taking me under your wing, Dried my tears of hurting past, Loved me from one moment to the last, Memeorie's that won't ever fade, Feelings I know I can't express, I'm never gonna leave you on floor, Not going to let you fall again. I'll be the bestest friend, Share the laughter we use to have. No lies we have to hide, You're the one I need in my life, My heart begains to flutter from your touch, When you kiss me I feel I'm free, Nobody can ever make me feel the way you do it's so real, Nothing I've ever known before Escaping in to your dreams at night how I long to hold you, Morning sun will rise again nex to me there you will be. Placing me hand on your heart feeling beats, That come from you I know they are true, Your eyes sparkle in the dark, Hearing your voice its begins to sooth, Moonlight pools around your face, Giving you an angelic glow, I can't erase your spirit from my head, I can't deny what I know is real. Scars that cover my left arm, Somehow to me you make them go away, Connected together from the start, You stole my heart to keep it safe, Touching with your fingertips I close my eyes with bliss, Imagaining everything we'd do I just ache to be with you. A flower bloomed in your honor, God gifted us for a reason, Even as the changing season. I wanted you to know I love you now forever more. © C.A.S"04" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is special...very touching |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a very special expression of love. Nicely done... Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Heavy duty stuff. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such emotion in your words... Couldn't help but understand the heartbeats. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very deep emotions here..well done. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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