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Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-04-05 01:38 PM

Slipping In……………….

May I slip in?

Just to read?

May I sigh
quietly
at this encompassing
compassion
you've name
poetry?

May I slip in?

Just to feel?

Hear the heartstring
song
so real…

May I slip out?

So silently
taking my
tears away,
for you see,
you have
touched the heart
of me
when I silently
slipped in
to read
you.

A day becomes
so quietly
a dream,

and your words
soon sound
so serene,

bringing music
to wind my soul ~

I wonder, was that
your goal?

You did it,
just so.

May I slip back in
to your embrace?
Softly now
and with light grace,
may I lay a finger
to your face
to trace
a lip,

a brow,

for you have touched
me vast

somehow.

Then

I shall slip away
and take with me
all you say
and keep it
here…

privately…

just your words

embracing me.

When next
I slip in
to read
know please sir
I am smiling
most pleasantly

when I rest
my eyes on
you.

~*~

With slight revision
04.05.04

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-04-05 01:46 PM

Library bound this jewel is!! hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-04-05 03:21 PM

Lovely love dear lady.
A keeper for my library.
Hugs~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-05 04:12 PM

Lots of "slipping" here... oops! Excellent write, enjoyed!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-04-05 08:05 PM

May I slip back in
to your embrace?
Softly now
and with light grace,
may I lay a finger
to your face
to trace
a lip,

a brow,

for you have touched
me vast

somehow.

Then

I shall slip away
and take with me
all you say
and keep it
here…

privately…

just your words

embracing me.

Sighhh Karilea

I'm keeping it

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

5 posted 2004-04-05 08:12 PM

Karilea this is brightly written and so worthy of being published.

Loved it and am keeping it!
Huggles, Marti

If you truly love Nature, you will find
beauty everywhere.
~Vincent Van Gogh ~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-04-05 09:10 PM

Your writing has a way of slipping into  memory and libraries!  As always, much enjoyed.
                     Sadie

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

7 posted 2004-04-05 11:37 PM

...gentle melodies of Sunshine--very calming

..spiros

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-06 02:25 AM

just gorgeous!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2004-04-06 07:22 PM

May I slip back in
to your embrace?
Softly now
and with light grace,
may I lay a finger
to your face
to trace
a lip,

a brow,

for you have touched
me vast

somehow.

Then

I shall slip away
and take with me
all you say
and keep it
here…

privately…

just your words

embracing me.

=================================

sometimes words are enough...sometimes its all we have....
lovely poetess Sun.