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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Butterflies flutter a little fishnet put together strung up tight a restless wanderer weaves it's way through the canyons of my mind pulled off the shoulder buttoned down the back dressed to the nines becoming in basic black sipping slowly red wine in winter warms the chill powdered glitter like sequins shine sprinkles in the moonlight cool nerves on edge slip from the stars anticipating you appeases me as candles burn softening the glow off setting white linen highlighting the darkness in shadows play perfecting the contrasts appeals to me in your presence. ~*~ |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
How I wish I could write with such saturating words! This is you...so evident of you, from what I have seen in the past month. Enjoy your style! McLean |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I imagined all the clouds of butterflies all swimming through the canyons and ceating rainbows upon the sunbeams, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ lovely as you....always good to read you girlie! luv ya... I lie awake at night |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bluesy - black becomes you... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Blues....your writing just keeps getting better and better. I love this!! hugs,Chris "At one glance |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, you do look fine in black! Blue's nice, but black -- wow! I like this poem very much...your introspective side gets a positive workout here, and this one's a pleasure to read. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I think I like this side of you...dressed to the nines  and black was never basic to me... hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you look good in black  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I tried to pick out my favorite lines... but all of them qualify! *S* You do look good in black, Bluesy one... and this is beautiful! *S* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful in...black...h |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...you painted a captivating picture here, but I think you would be lovely in any color. Hugs! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"perfecting the contrasts" smile. I believe you did, Lady Blue. So glad I popped in for this one. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
...almost like being there in your mind as you visualized what you were writing....very descriptive |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ooooh I lerrve black Enjoyed your poem Ms Blues and I love your pic Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
bluesy - ok, so you look good in beige, yellow, white, green, brown, violet, red, blue, h'mmmmmm.... BC |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy, this was very well done -- also liked the way you laid the poem out! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Every pic gets better...and every write. well done. Jason |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
(please post next pic in mature) |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sounds as if you had a wonderful time, the title was great and the lines a pleasure to read, I hope you have many more of those times my friend. Sincerely Rick |
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