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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such clever lament here... Enjoy your perspective so very much... Muted? I think not! TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful creation |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Very cool images...  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dawn, The images are superb... in the bedroom sky!!! Oh yea, this is so good! absolutely wonderful!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
muted So well done in quality and perception! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How nice! a beautiful presentation, so well written. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dawn this is beautifuly written...and having lived in this house of a 100 years, I have stared at those ceilings before... This is my favorite of yours now...and I loved the presentation.  I am so glad you returned even if not "pouting" anymore M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
muted Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nicely done! Nicely said... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
 bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
a deep jewel , blue crystal dreams ....... |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
landscape of the insomniac well done, putting into words what most of us have seen in our life. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 thanks everybody |
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DuckieGurL Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 15 |
heyy Muted!! i'm new and young. Your poem had enlightened my thoughts!! and mind |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply inspired write and beautiful presentation. Love, Margherita |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ah...yes..this was beyond great. I am stunned at the images that it provokes. Loved this: "Secrets embedded in fault lines" Well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done Dawn! Very clever presentation as well. *Good to see Trent in here too* Hugs~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very clever write of theme here poetess Dawn, impressive mixing of metaphor, personifi and imagery to create the mood and perspective. You know this moth loved this one. Very well done. Home is a feeling I buried in you ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ Oh my, how pretty~ I really liked the internal rhyme in this line of thought - 'defined by time and chance and lack of circumstance' You just rock the rhyme girlie~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
magic Dawn.... ~~**~~ The sound of silence calls, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream The echo of our souls meet ~~**~~ |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'nothing lasts forever'. So true. I like this, and I like the way you did it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey Dawn wonderfully penned thoughts ...I posted a poem last night about being a nightowl unable to sleep ... one of my sons as stars and moon on his ceiling , perhaps I should invest in some of those Hope |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Dawn, I am heading out for a few days vacation, but I just had to stop first and share my enthusiasm for your visual and poetic imagery. Simply stunning! And, I love your eye for observing close details and then integrating them with your heartfelt feelings.....Wonderful!!! ~P |
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