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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-04-05 02:16 PM

As you come through the door, you see me
sleeping on the couch, waiting for you
I awaken as you reach over to kiss me
wondering if this is a dream, or really true

Then I open my eyes and looking deeply
into your eyes, I know that it is true
For I can see deep into them all your love
shining clearly and brilliantly through

I see love like I have never known before
shining clearly through the eyes of you
Knowing that as you look down into my eyes
you see my love shining back at you, too

As our love is all aglow, we know
this is not a dream, but passionately true
Who could ever doubt, with love such as ours
you for me, me for you, true love between us two

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-04-05 02:29 PM

As our love is all aglow, we know
this is not a dream, but passionately true

Lucky you! But you don't me to tell you so.

Much enjoyed Ethel~

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

2 posted 2004-04-05 02:30 PM

its good to see that somewhere love still is alive and kicking....
really beautiful writing

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-04-05 02:34 PM

Ethel~

Can I hope it's more than a visit???

as long as you are happy...that's is all that counts.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-04-05 02:56 PM

Beautiful write!
JL

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

5 posted 2004-04-05 10:39 PM

Nothing more beautiful than mutual love-your life sounds wonderful. I enjoyed your up-lifting poem.
Sadie

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-06 02:23 AM

you always give me hope

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2004-04-06 01:00 PM

Yes that's it, it's not a dream, it's all true. You lucky gary's girl you!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2004-04-06 02:19 PM

nice read

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2004-04-06 02:44 PM

magic! simple magic ....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

10 posted 2004-04-06 03:08 PM

If I found you sleeping..you'd know it was me...cuz you'd feel my hands all over your body taking advantage of you....cuz I'm just a Toerag yanno?

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

11 posted 2004-04-06 06:23 PM

ah what's that bright light..
get my sunglasses
beautiful ethel
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2004-04-06 06:29 PM

Hi Ethel!!
This is beautiful sweetie!
Love it!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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