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Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-04-04 11:23 AM

Little Woman

he had authority
he exercised it on her
she 15
he 40

he crushed her virgin dreams

a business that never breaks even.

©2004 Grover Gall

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-04-04 11:39 AM

No, never.
Tough reality write.
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-04-04 02:05 PM

Softly spoken and hard hitting.
Very well done...and a sad state of affairs.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-04 02:21 PM

that's just sad and sickening

I guess this one hits hard because I have a 15 year old daughter...16 this month, but still just a child...not a woman

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2004-04-09 12:19 PM

this hits hard at home. well in my heart anyway, the first to take away from me was one who was suppose to be a dad. then another and another and another. i survived what was taken from me, then when i let love in, i opened up, only to have all used against me, so he can stand tall, while his drugs and alcohal, use me for his fall. love your writings. thanks

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

5 posted 2004-04-09 03:55 PM

Wow Grover this is sad, just plain heart breaking... Good write though.

~Kelly~

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2004-04-09 04:58 PM

I liked it alo, short but got a message across. Sometimes bad things happen.

Juju

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2004-04-10 08:13 PM

Nice writing...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-04-10 08:34 PM

I totally agree with Passing Shadows' comment as I have a daughter, too!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2004-04-10 09:16 PM

Good write and truthfully sad...wanted to see more though...but in it's simplicity it said enough...

jwesley

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