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zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2004-04-04 08:47 AM

One by one it's falling
each petal, darkened red
while my heart is calling
for some sign of regret

You say you need some time to think
to find the love that's in your heart
But time for me, it's the hard part,
I ache with each and every blink

So darling, do please hurry
and find your feelings true
'till that time I'll worry
and trust my love for you.
---
Long time since you've seen me write, i read you guys/girls each and every day though... Life once again brought me inspiration. Seems to be my muse only wants me during dark times :/

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-04-04 09:44 AM

zenny - good to have your words back on the pages of blue. maybe writing out your feelings will bring you out of the darkness and into the light - you and your muse. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2004-04-04 12:12 PM

don't fall too far , nice poem brimming with love

.......
JDW III

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-04 02:49 PM

zenny, I love this

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-04-04 03:14 PM

it speaks
keep going, dont stop writing

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-04-04 03:43 PM

Sounds like your muse is related to mine,
they're a fickle bunch aren't they?!

Nice to see you around, enjoyed your poem zenny~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-04 03:54 PM

A very good write!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-04-04 04:35 PM

to find the love that's in your heart

nicely done, but...
if the have to find it...I don't know how strong a love it could be...

sort of living your poem

M

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-04-04 04:41 PM

zenny
Good write, enjoyed the read.

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

9 posted 2004-04-05 11:22 AM

thank you all for replying

and nakdthoughts: you're right there, i got his conclusion yesterday: he didn't find any love anymore...

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