Open Poetry #31 |
Intimate Passions Realised |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Intimate Passions Realised The candles are burning I have dressed in red lace Soon you shall be here Can't wait to see your face Hoping all goes to plan I've longed for this so much As I await in anticipation Knowing soon we will touch My heart begins to race The butterflies inside dance Will it be like we imagine A night of sensual romance As the clock counts down There is a few minutes more My heart skipped a beat I hear the knock on the door Greeting welcoming smiles Hugs in a warming embrace Its what we had waited for Love whispered face to face Sensuous lips flowed softly Bodies caress in candlelight Intimate passions realised Into endless waves of delight HopeĀ©2004 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
WHEW! Ya wanna get married girl? WHAT! you're already married? And I was going to take you on an expensive cruise.......... I think this is as sweet and romantic as it gets. I hope every word of it's true. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Eric what a wonderful reply , you had me smiling happily ....because I am married to a man that is married to the T.V this was Hope mind having another episode in passionate romantic mode Thanks for your fun response Hope |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Hope You are magic Dave |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Your poetry always has such beautiful rhyme and rhythm. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, dear Hope, this is so passionate that my heart also began to race .... haha. Wonderfully done! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Dave for your kind reply , all I hope is that the muse continues waving that wand Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Grover , so pleased you enjoy my writing .....I always rhyme .. they just seem to come out that way Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Margherita , so pleased you felt the excitement ...heart racing , yes it can be a wonderful feeling Hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like the romantic thoughts here...get rid of that TV...James |
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