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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Privy I am privy to the nest Where poet birds come to rest Place their thread of woven rhyme And weave it in, in dated time Each will stitch a different shade To add a hitch of golden braid And leave a piece of feathered wear As much as they could leave in dare And in this bit of mental swish Lies the dipper of the wish To sip the nectar of each flower And savor each their love and power For in gentle flight of write Lies the mighty of the might An offering within a goal Their passage and their gracious soul So flies these gentle birds of flight Through the day and through the night |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes you are privy to that nest and we're glad you are. I think this is a super line "Lies the dipper of the wish" Regards Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very well woven Sey....enjoyed the read.. Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sunny Saturday morning verse Sy! Very much enjoyed the read. Chai tea this morn...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Oh I love this you have a great imagination, very beautiful poem...thanks Rene` |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great metaphor Sy. And a wonderful write!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nothing like nesting, hey, Sy? Good morning Sir! I hope you have an exceptionally fine day!  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You weave your words so well my friend. Hugs to you this sunny morn! Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Morning greetings and salutations, Sir Tumbleweed! I know that I am eternally grateful to be privy to the fruits of YOUR quill on a daily basis!  This poem really hit home. We are all so fortunate to be able to share in the wealth of poetic thoughts and expressions here at Passions.  Have a glorious day, Dear One! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Thanks for the read and reply. Goldenrose I thank you. Nancy Thank you dear.  Rene` You welcome. scorpio Thank you my friend. Sunshine Thank you Chris Thank you sweet. Earth Angel My gentle angel. :queeze: |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I am privy to the nest Where poet birds come to rest Place their thread of woven rhyme And weave it in, in dated time Each will stitch a different shade To add a hitch of golden braid And leave a piece of feathered wear As much as they could leave in dare" Poet birds...love that. Very cool write Sy.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Thank you my friend. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Sir Poet, I enjoyed this one greatly. Flying is what we all try indeed! Love and Joy. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you for the lovely reply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
in a Springy mood Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I guess so,  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
For in gentle flight of write Lies the mighty of the might An offering within a goal Their passage and their gracious soul So flies these gentle birds of flight Through the day and through the night Beautiful, dear Seymour. Good to read you!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Thank you for the sweet reply. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
birds....... build nests out of twigs, poets out of words, and me.... a little of both. I used to rhyme, now syllables and stuff. Juju |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Juju Cute reply, enjoyed. |
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