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My Heart On My Sleave.
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My Heart On My Sleave. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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my fingers are moving so fast i can't feel them anymore the numbness sets in.. not just my fingers.. you look at me like you want me when no ones looking. i look at you like i need you when everyones looking. my only accessory is my heart on my sleave.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you look at me like you want me when no ones looking. i look at you like i need you when everyones looking. hate to single anything out but l#ved those lines. Another fellow canuck, excellent |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is passionate urgency in this write....intense....fine writing... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
"My only accessory is my heart on my sleeve" ^*Beautifully finalised with this last line*^ This was a very strong and powerful poem, I fear too full of emotion to be ficticious. Hope this person treats you as you deserve  ^*Smile...it confuses people*^ ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! |
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