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Shelter It With Lies....For Passing
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Shelter It With Lies....For Passing |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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SECRET TIMES song 1061 you sell me short with empty lies, you think you're playin me, you fake your best in private times, pretending you're so meek. from a distance you disgrace, the love I still have, but everytime that we embrace, I feel that I've been had how did it happen where did you go, I know the thrill is gone, I felt you drop me from your soul The love you had moved on And if it's true there's someone new, I know that you resigned to hurt the one that still loves you, and shelter it with lies I don't like games I won't brush, your skin like you adore, I love you still but when we touch, I can't feel you anymore. out of the heartbank lost and found, I'll find a heart like mine, to fill the void you opened up, you'll hear my last good-bye how did it happen, where did you go, I know the thrill is gone, I felt you drop me from your soul, The love you had moved on And if it's true there's someone new, I know that you resigned, to hurt the one that loved you so, and shelter it with lies. (outro) But when I'm gone your mind will whirl You'll remember our good times And your new girl won't fill your world with a love as true as mine.....fade..... Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Much talent, great song! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
for passing? passing shadows/Dixie? if so, i think she will love it! youve expressed this so well..  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
hmmmm i smell the wood burning........hmm very interesting, as passing herself has said |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Eric, Your words moved me in so many ways, truly a beautiful song for our Shadowy one. *Bravo Sir* |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i enjoyed reading this. i am sorry but your picture reminds me of someone from along time ago. eyes that i cant forget. not a good memory i am afraid to say. but one i have forgiven. you write nice. i read your web page. enjoyed it too. some made me cry.  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Fine writing...i enjoyed reading... Thanks.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to everyone for dropping in to read this piece. I have been reading some of Divie's love lament poems lately so thought I'd write this little song to let her know I sympathize. Regards Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Eric, dear Eric...you have touched my heart and soul you are a darling man  I can hear that music in my mind, and I can see that you really do understand. That's all I ever want for. I'm keeping this in my library, not for the reason of having it to remember you by...(I will never forget this beauty)...but just for the sake of holding a friend close always. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks back to ya Dixie and I wish you the best in the future. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome Always enjoy your lyrics. Good one |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eric, very well said and sung. So appropriate. Well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 had to read again |
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