Is Acrostic Some Kind Of Lung Disease?

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Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

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Ala bam a

0 posted 2004-04-02 04:09 PM

Acrostic's some kind of poem
Containing a device
Rhyming's not important, no it
Only makes it nice
Sometimes I find it difficult
To find which words to choose
It took me fifteen minutes
Composing this for "youse"

Acrostic is really such a pain
Coming up with words that rhyme
Really, it's not essential and
Often takes much time
So if you have the will power
To try "Acrostic" schtuff
It'll take alot of beer
Cuz this Acrostic schtuff sure sux.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2004-04-02 04:11 PM

ROFLMAO... Gehundseit! *G*

I like this very much... a double whammy of great! *S*

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-04-02 04:34 PM

Toe's wit is such a treat
Outrageousness, his forte
Every time I read his posts
Riotous laughter fills my day
Always clever, ever a charm
Great poet he is [but raised in a barn!]

[or so they say...

]

zippi
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since 2004-03-31

Posts 56
California

3 posted 2004-04-02 04:38 PM

Well I for one
Think this was fun
I want to let you know
When you take the time
To make it rhyme
It really helps the flow.
Rene`

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-04-02 10:27 PM

LOL...you..you...LOL

geesh, darned comedians!!

Balladeer

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5 posted 2004-04-02 10:57 PM

Bold you are to try this.
It's not an easy thing.
Toerags can't do very much
Except for booze and flings.

May good blessings come your way
Each and every Toerag day!

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

6 posted 2004-04-03 03:19 AM

grins nice Toe

Beer, the answer to and cause of, all life's problems

~Homer Simpson

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
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7 posted 2004-04-03 06:28 AM

lol.. very funny, but also filled with truth..

enjoyed
________ice
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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2004-04-03 06:40 AM

Very funny write Toe....i like Homer's words...beer sometimes can help the flow of words..but not too much....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Kicking Kim
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since 2001-04-16

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9 posted 2004-04-03 07:14 AM

C ontagious are acrostics
O ften getting in our head.
O nce we think we've lost it
L ustful rhymes climb into bed.

P ity sake the rhyme must go
O ver and out of my mind.
E ven though I like the flow
M y brain just wants to rhyme.

^*-As my lil acrostic says...-*^
^*-COOL POEM-*^

I really enjoyed the flow and the rhythm!!

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2004-04-03 07:30 AM

I thought Acrostic was something that happened to a pro baseball player when his heavy gold cross and chain flew up and hit him on the nose while throwing a pitch.....But this, this is very enlightening.....

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

11 posted 2004-04-03 10:24 AM

Here I go again havin' to look in the dictionary. Thought this was goin' to be about music(acoustic)
not acrostic (diffucult words).
Yepper I think you got it. It is a lung disease.
LOL Bon-Bon

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