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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-04-02 10:07 AM

You come and go,
your face lost
as the sky becomes
a darkened mirror
to your whereabouts,

the moon will return to me,

in its contortioncy,
its tiny crescent
a shout of faith
in a world swallowed
of light,

only a prelude
to its bravado,
come the crescendo
as the cycle comes
full once more,
revealing the unknown lover

hey anyone is contortioncy a word?

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-04-02 10:20 AM

In the way of the poet, you create.
Contortioncy is not a known word...but contortive certainly is...and I certainly got it.
Wonderful write.
TD

Kicking Kim
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 426
Cloud Cucko Land!

2 posted 2004-04-02 10:51 AM

I loved the pure meaning
mixed with the gentle blend of imagery.
I think that your poetic skills
really shone through in this one!

^*-Kimberley-*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2004-04-02 10:52 AM

enjoyed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-04-02 11:19 AM

Lunar magic!

EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-04-02 11:22 AM

and that's how words are created

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

6 posted 2004-04-02 12:30 PM

Great mix of emotions, human relations and natural images...and so you made up a word...it works for me...~P

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

7 posted 2004-04-02 01:32 PM

Enjoyed this!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

8 posted 2004-04-02 01:32 PM

you could have used contortiveness... but who says one can't come up with new words if the essence can be maintained...

words are great when strung together like you do...

regards
sudhir

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2004-04-03 07:25 AM

Good for you. You are now in the point of your writing career you can make up words. Its cute! Enjoyed as usual

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

10 posted 2004-04-03 07:43 AM

thanks kids

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