Open Poetry #31 |
The Unknown Lover |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
You come and go, your face lost as the sky becomes a darkened mirror to your whereabouts, the moon will return to me, in its contortioncy, its tiny crescent a shout of faith in a world swallowed of light, only a prelude to its bravado, come the crescendo as the cycle comes full once more, revealing the unknown lover hey anyone is contortioncy a word? |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
In the way of the poet, you create. Contortioncy is not a known word...but contortive certainly is...and I certainly got it. Wonderful write. TD |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
I loved the pure meaning mixed with the gentle blend of imagery. I think that your poetic skills really shone through in this one! ^*-Kimberley-*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lunar magic! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and that's how words are created |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Great mix of emotions, human relations and natural images...and so you made up a word...it works for me...~P |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed this! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you could have used contortiveness... but who says one can't come up with new words if the essence can be maintained... words are great when strung together like you do... regards sudhir |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Good for you. You are now in the point of your writing career you can make up words. Its cute! Enjoyed as usual |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks kids |
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