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PassionatelyRomantic
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since 2004-01-24
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0 posted 2004-04-01 08:11 PM



Oh mistress mine, whose heart has felt as mine?
For the time is young, and young is to love,
and so it is best, bear thy love as thine-
(what lies 'neath your breast, is what I speek of).
So sweet is thy love, may I be your first,
to delight in forbidden desire;
so unabiding is love to quench this thirst,
to immerse thy soul into passion's fire?
Doth thou not see what love is all about-
for such sweet a thing, to live in this heart,
tho' boundless in nature, it flows throughout-
engulfing souls at rest? Then let not part-
thy tender love, for thy world is a stage,
and thy heart, a player, trapped in it's cage!

© Copyright 2004 Jared Lee Dudgeon - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2004-04-01 08:31 PM


Shakespearean magic.....
Well done!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
2 posted 2004-04-01 10:43 PM


Wonderful

Juju

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-04-02 02:11 AM


excellent!
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2004-04-02 03:35 PM


Bravo!
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2004-04-02 05:14 PM


Absolutely wonderful!
JL


JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-04-05 07:17 PM


Enjoyed...James
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