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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
How can this be reality at all? When all I see is an image of me when I fall Broken into a thousand speckles Glimmering in your spectacles Shivering in your arms And breaking down your fictitious alarms Creating a jar full of lies I am broken by your demise Shock victimized A casualty within your eyes Counting all of my tears Liquefied by your fears Grasping onto your imagination Dining at your resurrection Educating your final correction Blooming to your goddess I see your promise Blooming towards your goddess I acknowledge your defiance I can't comprehend your dark relentlessness I can show you your recklessness Finally believing my joyfulness Concluding your acquaintance I will detonate your ignorance Promising your forgiveness As she looks upon her goddess I forget her promise Flying to her goddess I remember her defiance |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Intense, enjoyed!  |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the sentiments seem to be of a bygone era. thanks for the time trip. -majnu |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Well written ..very powerful post.. I enjoyed!  ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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