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Open Poetry #31

Walking With The Tides

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-04-01 02:01 PM

Spring,
not yet standing proud,
young wet picture album
loud color pages stuck together,
photos not yet taken;
Winter,
sullen but unbowed
not yet completely shaken.

©2004 by icebox

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-04-01 02:02 PM

A beautiful image here!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-04-01 02:04 PM

icebox,
Well said my friend.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-04-01 02:04 PM

Soon..soon we will fill the album with brightly colored pictures..
Soon old man winter will give up....
Well done and much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Before befriending butterflies
you have to meet with midnight moths.~

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-04-01 02:05 PM

very nice and unique way of expressing

fresh breath of air much enjoyed

Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2004-04-01 02:07 PM

Oh but it will be. The melting, and the melting into summer, comes closer every day.

This an excellent little poem, catches the mood perfectly and frames it so well. Good stuff.

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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-04-01 02:09 PM

icebox

Fresh, vivid images....enjoyed!

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