Open Poetry #31 |
Paradise |
PassionatelyRomantic Member
since 2004-01-24
Posts 190 |
Eyes have never know of beauty, more astonishing than autumn's wood. As the rising sun- shines majestically, filtering through the dying foliage, that trees do boast so proudly; only to lose to a gentle breeze, that whisks its' beauty away, to blanket the umarked graves, of fallen companions. What more can be said of the trees, that have stood the burden of time; and through the plague that relieves, them to stay in such a place- as Paradise. And to the inhabitants that do call home, from fowl to deer, that give breath to thee- Truley nothing is more admirable- than that of these inhabitants, as they live honorably; in a world of innocense! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm glad that I decided to look back on the back pages today. If not, I would have missed this poem. I liked it. Hugs Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I totally agree with the sentiment here! (Have one myself along the same lines which I might post one day.) -- This was an excellent rendering! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
This was so beautiful it needs to go up top! ~ARH love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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