Open Poetry #31 |
bleach |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
listening to songs today that make the heart go mellow light and dark are just two shades that bleach life back to shallow writing such stuffy lines of shabby melodies marked by odd outer rhymes and weird inner times when all I need to know is how you are doing in your present days and if you readily admit the past was all a big mistake but as long as I can write all such nonsensical trite should I truly need to know if your times go fast or slow hurt sits inside of me like a sinful inner child begging forgiveness and small-time mercies like short-second glimpses of the face in your eyes and hints of a smile are fast-fading like times gone by sometimes I guess I just need you to know that I still care sometimes I guess I just need to know if you had once cared before bleaching the yellow of my day |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful melancholy write Sudhir. Could feel the ache in this.. but sometimes we really just need to know, right? ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yes, sometimes all we really need... is to know. A great write Sudi Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
We all really need love. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
We all need something or the other... thanks a lot, my friends for passing by and leaving behind footprints ... regards sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always enjoy you when you write |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how could she not care? a beautiful write filled with emotions and honesty. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank a lot, dear friends... regards sudhir |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
sometimes I guess I just need you to know that I still care sometimes I guess I just need to know if you had once cared before bleaching the yellow of my day Excellent! Sadie |
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