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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
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 . . Stardust sifts from eyes That once were blind to your guile Heart crawls back from sleeve Cupid's wings detach themselves My love tumbles down to earth . . Chris Barker March 31, 2004 ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Chris!!! Oooh I love this...another keeper!! ~Hugs, love and miss ya, Teed~ ~Before befriending butterflies |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Chris...  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Chris you have no idea how closely this hits home... I'm keepin it.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh gawd! how simply gorgeous!! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou lovely ladies!! Hugs! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very well expressed. The images are sad and haunting. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
thankyou and hugs scorpio!  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Chris, that was a little piece of poetic perfection! Warm hugs, Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Always so beautiful you. TD |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Linda & TD, what kind words! Thankyou both. hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 oh my, you managed to make the "ache" sooo beautiful |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
hugs and thanks to you muted. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Chris! |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Well done Chris - I really enjoyed this - you write it so very well - Paul |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Sue & Paul for reading and commenting. hugs! |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
So few words, such a powerful message. I truly love this, a fine and beautiful piece of literture. Rene` |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
oooo...this was a small gourmet for the mind and spirit! I saw and felt...and oh was imagery wonderful. Yumm! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou Rene' & D's !! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Heart crawls back from sleeve loved that line Chris~ Your poem and the picture compliment each other, beautifully~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou so much Bluesylady! hugs! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice one...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
thankyou James. Hugs! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
aching beautifully....  ~~**~~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lauren - thankyou dear poetess. Hugs! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I'm so glad I saw this tonight...it is so real and you so lovely! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think there is no way to say it more efficiently and more beautifully. Just perfect and incredibly well matched with the picture! A true little gem! I will keep it ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Martie & Margherita, I am thrilled by your comments. Hugs! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WOW! You go girl! I could not be prouder of you! Proud to call you friend! Proud to call you POET! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interloper - my goodness! Your words have made my sunny Sunday complete. thankyou so much for believing in me when I didn't believe in myself. Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks Grover! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful, Chris.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very beautiful Chris. Maree Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I love short poems. So much is said with so little makes me smile! Juju |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel & Marie, thankyou both so much. Hugs !! Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
oops, almost missed thanking you juju. I am so glad you enjoyed this Tanka. |
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