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inspiredpoetwriter
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since 2002-01-05
Posts 104
Minnesota

0 posted 2004-03-31 12:03 PM


a tear needs a reason for falling this was it...Comments...

1 tear
Is to cause the pain
2 tears
Here comes the rain
3 tears
To break a promise
4 tears
Screaming out her name
5 tears
Is numbing the healing
6 tears
I have no feelings
7 tears
I'll confesse my sins
8 tears
over coming my fears
9 tears
to stop the mending
10 tears
drowding the hurtful love
11 tears
washing away the past
12 tears
painting your expressions
13 tears
aching for freedom
14 tears
unfolding secrets
© C.S "04"

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2004-03-31 01:34 AM


That's a lot of crying for different reasons. Many perspectives for tears expressed in this. Enjoyable read.

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-03-31 03:32 AM


yeah...sigh
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2004-04-01 10:40 PM


Wow, beautiful, I applaud.

Juju

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2004-04-02 03:49 PM


I've never counted my tears. Thanks for the insight.
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