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Open Poetry #31

black-smear me

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-03-31 12:00 PM

image©legac

black-smear me

does she
wear my lip's
black-smear
hope
or was i forgotten
before the
stain

©snow'04

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2004-03-31 12:38 PM

there is an echo after i read this .... i had to read it again....
and again
-wolfy

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2004-03-31 01:26 AM

Thought provoking write.

Eric

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-03-31 03:04 AM

sigh

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2004-04-08 07:54 AM

once again, an incredibly impressive write.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2004-04-08 08:18 AM

Yo Snow
Way to go
Luvtoe

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